Grades 4–8
- Reading for the claim
- Sentences that hold
- Narratives with a turn
- Vocabulary in context
Leila edits student writing the way she edits her own: cut the filler, keep the sentence that is doing the work.
Grades 4–12 and college seminars

Where it usually stalls
Essays that start and never arrive
Highlighting everything, remembering nothing
Grammar rules with nowhere to put them
What the trial is
Send a paragraph, or a page you are avoiding. In forty minutes it will have a point, and you will know which sentence earned it.
What we actually cover
Who teaches it